it's funny...
I read that comment about 'and now I'm going to skip' and I thought it was actually cool not to have to re-read the same pointless rewrite...
...I agree the actual comment was uncool. The author should have stuck with the original 'Suiren' format (which this fic seems heavily inspired by in it's
underlying thrust) where each scene is ONLY the change points and or differences/AU events and everything else is left out.
That always feels like a better approach to me with incremental AU rewrites.
Although given that 'Suiren' is the chinese equivalent of 'Prometheus', I'm not sure that name for Sakura's clan matches the 'white
lily' angle as it seems to be supposed to.
'Suiren' and the will of fire makes sense... white lilies and self brain surgery not so much...
I read that comment about 'and now I'm going to skip' and I thought it was actually cool not to have to re-read the same pointless rewrite...
...I agree the actual comment was uncool. The author should have stuck with the original 'Suiren' format (which this fic seems heavily inspired by in it's
underlying thrust) where each scene is ONLY the change points and or differences/AU events and everything else is left out.
That always feels like a better approach to me with incremental AU rewrites.
Although given that 'Suiren' is the chinese equivalent of 'Prometheus', I'm not sure that name for Sakura's clan matches the 'white
lily' angle as it seems to be supposed to.
'Suiren' and the will of fire makes sense... white lilies and self brain surgery not so much...