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A Light In The Darkness (Quest fic- votes and critiques welcome!)
 
(Sure, I can bang that out.)
While you rest, you turn your attention inward.  You're familiar with your own basic structure- you watched it build itself, after all!- but now you have the time to devote to a more detailed examination.
At the moment, your 'body' is essentially your mind.  In form, it is a sphere, segmented into a number of layers.
The core of the sphere is empty; it is here where the light of your Will gathers.  Around it is the true center of your being- the idea of Existence.  It manifests as a framework- one piece, unlike the more composite structures of the upper levels- wrapped around the empty space of your core.
[Huginn- Target: 10(+20)= 30Roll: 90FAILURE]
[Huginn- Target: 10(+20)= 30Roll: 27SUCCESS]
Just looking at it, you can see... weaknesses.  Structural flaws.  It does the job, but it could be stronger than it is.
[Integrity stat unlocked!]
[Your Integrity has been increased to 1!]
(Integrity
is the durability of your current existence.  If it reaches 0, you are
destabilized.  In this state, you are vulnerable!)
Surrounding- built upon- the idea of your Existence is a network of... the best description you can come up with is 'fragments'.  Bits of structure, linked together in a chaotic mess.  The fragments are constantly shifting, breaking apart and welding together into new shapes all the time.  It doesn't take you much effort- just touching a few fragments, and seeing what they are- to figure out that each individual piece is a thought.
The final layer of your thought-body is filled with the same sort of metaphysical fragments as the one inside of it.  Here, though, they've been assembled into something resembling a coherent, architecturally sound structure.  These fragments, now a whole, rarely move at all.  Again, discerning the purpose of this layer is simple.  One touch to a particularly sturdy-looking beam, and you find yourself reliving the day your gal kissed you for the first time.  Given that, you decide it's a safe bet that they're memories.

My Unitarian Jihad Name is: Brother Atom Bomb of Courteous Debate. Get yours.

I've been writing a bit.
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