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[RFC] Super Dimension Magical Girl Lyrical Skitter
 
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I will assure you all that I do, in fact, have plans, that Presea's existence is a key part of, and specifically both her presence and that of Nanoha in this opening.

Chapter one is mostly complete at this point and I have about 500 words worth of chapter two written so far. Have a teaser:

Quote:"So, Ms. Hebert, since it looks like you're going to be our guest for a while, the director and I have authorized you for access to the base network." He produced an object from a desk drawer, once I had a clear view it looked to be some sort of wide bracelet, the sort that covers most of your forearm, made of white plastic. "This is a basic storage device, we keep a few on hand for guests or temporary replacements. If you'll press your thumb to the screen there?"

Frowning slightly, I did so, and a light passed over the screen, like a photocopier scanning a page.

"New user acknowledged," a mechanical voice stated from the armband. "Please state user name."

"Taylor Hebert." That was why it disturbed me. It was a lot like the armbands Dragon used to hand out at Endbringer fights. But apparently these people used it for, well, just about everything.

"New user initiated. Thank you, my master." it said.
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Sucrose Octanitrate.
Proof positive that with sufficient motivation, you can make anything explode.
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