Hey guys! Sorry about the necromancy, but I felt better about doing that than starting a new thread.
Since Google Drive has become far more versatile as of late, I've decided to start leaving most of my more polished work there as well as working towards better organizing it.
To that end, I've begun splitting BYiS into proper chapters for later posting.
You can find the chapters I've split off the main document here:
http://drive.google.com/folderview?id= ... sp=sharing
Part of why I'm sharing the folder is because I'd like critique and commentary about how I'm splitting things up. Also, I'm adding a bit more polish to the story - attempting to fix whatever continuity errors there are, adding bits of narrative for flavor (like Garrick's cat), and generally trying to make it read more naturally (ie, fixing tricky and weirdly structured sentences and poor word choices).
I'll be setting the individual documents so that guests can post in-line comments, so if you see something that bugs you for any reason, then by all means, flag it out for me.
EDIT: Also, if you see something that requires real discussion, put it up in this thread and we'll go at it. I want as much communication as possible!
Since Google Drive has become far more versatile as of late, I've decided to start leaving most of my more polished work there as well as working towards better organizing it.
To that end, I've begun splitting BYiS into proper chapters for later posting.
You can find the chapters I've split off the main document here:
http://drive.google.com/folderview?id= ... sp=sharing
Part of why I'm sharing the folder is because I'd like critique and commentary about how I'm splitting things up. Also, I'm adding a bit more polish to the story - attempting to fix whatever continuity errors there are, adding bits of narrative for flavor (like Garrick's cat), and generally trying to make it read more naturally (ie, fixing tricky and weirdly structured sentences and poor word choices).
I'll be setting the individual documents so that guests can post in-line comments, so if you see something that bugs you for any reason, then by all means, flag it out for me.
EDIT: Also, if you see something that requires real discussion, put it up in this thread and we'll go at it. I want as much communication as possible!