Sorry, Rajvik - this is pretty much it.
I do intend to post it somewhere, but you must bear in mind that what I post here is the very first rough draft (after filtering out most of the spelling and grammar errors). I'm hoping to get critique over the style of writing, the plotline, and the portrayal of the characters.
That said, hearing that you like it so much is a helpful thing for me - I at least know that I'm on the right track with this.
I do intend to post it somewhere, but you must bear in mind that what I post here is the very first rough draft (after filtering out most of the spelling and grammar errors). I'm hoping to get critique over the style of writing, the plotline, and the portrayal of the characters.
That said, hearing that you like it so much is a helpful thing for me - I at least know that I'm on the right track with this.