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the newest eyrie is out early this year....
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11-07-2014, 10:39 PM
Hmmm. I can sort of understand it, but it doesn't really feel right to me. (Not intended as disparagement, it just doesn't resonate over here.) And, well, doesn't entirely address my issue.

It comes down to the part in "What's Past Is Prologue" where Nall talks about having broken up with Umi. But I'm not sure Umi thinks that. And it doesn't really feel right for Nall to think so either. So despite liking a lot of the interactions between Lhakpa and Nall, they feel very uncomfortable.

-Morgan.
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