I'm doing a lousy job of managing my own time of late -- between the holidays and the tsuris of dealing with my early-Alzheimer's mother and both putting her in and and then taking her out of assisted living -- I've not done a lick of work on IST25 or really any of my other writing. But I feel it's necessary that I show solidarity with a fellow writer. Not knowing what fandom it's for, I can't guarantee that I'll be able to catch characterization or continuity things, but I will do what I can. (And I'll also make an effort to respond to your C&C on the first half of DW8-4.)
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.