Quote:Though a lot of the stuff you posted isn't something that feels like a suspension of disbelief issue to me, rather than just generic crap.Well, I guess I have a wider definition of what constitutes a violation of suspension. Anything that damages the transparency of the narrative, by which I mean drawing attention to the fact that it is a story, is an SOD issue to me. And that includes anything where I stop and go, "no, that's wrong" for any reason.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.