Haperry, the only way to get better is to write moar... and it's not like I'm trying for a heavily observed continuity. Let's see what you've got! (signature relevant)
Manytales, nice one - sounds vaguely TORG or Superdimension Century Orguss like, if without the overplots; a great spot for a travelogue game even before adding in the diplomatic aspect. A future snip, I take it? (Oh, and that last "you're" should just be "your.") I especially like the standard disclaimer.
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
Manytales, nice one - sounds vaguely TORG or Superdimension Century Orguss like, if without the overplots; a great spot for a travelogue game even before adding in the diplomatic aspect. A future snip, I take it? (Oh, and that last "you're" should just be "your.") I especially like the standard disclaimer.
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows