The little snippet that occurred to me isn't related to the above at all, and would probably go better in your other fic come to that, but it's a bit of dialogue and seemed worth sharing in hopes of being helpful, since I certainly don't have any call for it myself, more's the pity. While shopping:
She: How do you like this one?
He (looking at her face, not the clothes): You look beautiful, hon.
She: You're no help...
He: Just pick whatever makes you happy; putting a smile on your face is the most the work of mere mortals can do to make you look more beautiful anyway.
Yes, I am a great big ol' sap, why do you ask?
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
She: How do you like this one?
He (looking at her face, not the clothes): You look beautiful, hon.
She: You're no help...
He: Just pick whatever makes you happy; putting a smile on your face is the most the work of mere mortals can do to make you look more beautiful anyway.
Yes, I am a great big ol' sap, why do you ask?
--
"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows