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Newest Eyrie
 
I find myself of two minds regarding this piece.

On the one hand, it's genuinely entertaining and I'm laughing at the jokes, references, and what have you all over the place.

On the other, I'm kind of waiting for the get up and go to get up and go. The FMP overhaul here is fairly obvious, but given I'm rewatching FMP on my household's anime night at the moment, what this appears to be missing is really a mention of the overall plot. Thus far we have....crazy but well-meaning mercenary guy is guarding Kaname...but no idea why. The lack of an outside context makes me continue waiting for the respective "other shoe" to drop that makes Sousuke's presence necessary.

Then again, having hit equilibrium with Sousuke, it's entirely likely that the next chapter will be a school trip of some kind that is derailed by terrorists.
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"Oh, silver blade, forged in the depths of the beyond. Heed my summons and purge those who stand in my way. Lay
waste."


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Newest Eyrie - by Bob Schroeck - 10-22-2008, 02:18 AM
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