Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions

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Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions

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Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions

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01-05-2008, 03:09 AM

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Angelic Layer. A girl takes part in a strange fighting competition, run by a mysterious and creepy old man in search of her mother who disappeared years ago.

Shouldn't the comma be after "man" instead of where it is? Otherwise it doesn't sound right.
The Nanoha ones give an impression a bit too close to what actually happens I think. '.'
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Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by robkelk - 01-04-2008, 06:15 PM

Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by Jinx999 - 01-04-2008, 06:53 PM

More of them - by Bluemage - 01-04-2008, 07:08 PM

Re: More of them - by Epsilon - 01-04-2008, 07:45 PM

Re: More of them - by CattyNebulart - 01-04-2008, 08:12 PM

Re: More of them - by Bob Schroeck - 01-04-2008, 09:51 PM

Re: More of them - by WengFook - 01-04-2008, 10:51 PM

Re: More of them - by Kokuten - 01-04-2008, 11:40 PM

Re: More of them - by ECSNorway - 01-05-2008, 12:29 AM

Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by Morganite - 01-05-2008, 03:09 AM

Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by robkelk - 01-05-2008, 04:06 AM

Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by Jinx999 - 01-05-2008, 01:45 PM

Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by Morganite - 01-06-2008, 10:45 PM

Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by ECSNorway - 01-06-2008, 11:15 PM

Nanoha - by gamlain - 01-06-2008, 11:35 PM

Re: Nanoha - by Morganite - 01-07-2008, 07:35 AM

Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by robkelk - 01-07-2008, 08:53 PM

Re: Challenge for Fun II: Inappropriate Descriptions - by robkelk - 01-07-2008, 10:15 PM

More inappropriate.. - by gamlain - 01-08-2008, 07:54 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by Morganite - 01-08-2008, 09:18 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by WengFook - 01-08-2008, 09:53 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by kestrel404 - 01-08-2008, 06:53 PM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by Valles - 01-08-2008, 07:11 PM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by Bob Schroeck - 01-08-2008, 09:57 PM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by ECSNorway - 01-09-2008, 12:06 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by robkelk - 01-09-2008, 12:41 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by Bob Schroeck - 01-09-2008, 04:01 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by CattyNebulart - 01-09-2008, 09:22 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 01-09-2008, 09:33 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by Acyl - 01-09-2008, 08:21 PM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by robkelk - 01-10-2008, 01:47 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by robkelk - 01-19-2008, 04:35 AM

Re: More inappropriate.. - by Jinx999 - 01-24-2008, 12:00 AM

[No subject] - by Angryoptimist - 01-24-2008, 01:07 AM

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