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The Orochi's 8th Update thread of Doom
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01-16-2009, 08:44 PM
Quote:www.fanfiction.net/s/4334542/8/The_Gras ... ys_Greener
You know, over the past few days, I've read several of kb0's stories, including this one, and I find myself in a weird superposition of states between "impressed" and "disappointed". kb0's not a bad writer at all, technically proficient, good at laying down a plot and staying to it, tells a good story -- but everything he/she writes comes across as... well, heavily medicated. As in a serious dosage of Valium. Any excitement seems to be viewed through a filter that damps it down and fuzzes it out. This particular story... Harry and Voldemort's faceoff should have been fraught with a certain amount of energy and tension; instead, it read like the text equivalent of the Bugs Bunny cartoon where they break the jar of ether and everyone runs in slow motion until they fall asleep.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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