Quote: "Her face had the fragrance of a gibbous moon".Well, among other things, it means he doesn't grasp the definition of the word "fragrance." Maybe he was thinking of
What the hell does that even mean? My poor poor brain.
"radiance."
One of the thoughts that crossed my mind when I glanced over his, ummm, writing, was that some of the metaphors reminded me of a few from the Song of
Solomon (which has more than its share of stupid metaphors* -- whoops, that lightning bolt nearly got me), but with the stupidity level cranked up not to
eleven, but to twenty-two.
* What, "breasts like twin fawns"? Does that mean they've got legs? "Belly like a heap of wheat"? Somebody must've
shipped Solly some really good hash just before he wrote that.
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Big Brother is watching you. And damn, you are so bloody BORING.