Quote:"breasts like twin fawns"? Does that mean they've got legs? "Belly like a heap of wheat"?Well, it depends on what you get out of their descriptions. Both would be golden-tan in color, which is a good candidate for at least part of of his intent, to draw a parallel to the skin color of his beloved (middle east, remember). You've got the connotations of youth with fawns -- always a safe bet when making comparisons to breasts. And a heap of wheat would also be smoothly rounded -- the penchant for a perfectly flat belly is a relatively recent development; rounded bellies were considered beautiful for millennia.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.