Quote: Bob Schroeck wrote:
Quote: Considering it was a follow-up to "Ranma turns into a Darkstalkers-style succubus" porn, I'm surprised you expected quality here.I never read the first story.
I read the first chapter or two of the first story, and therefore didn't bother to start the second.
Also, having looked at the first chapter of that "Hokage's Hat" fic, I'm a little unclear on how it can be described as "one of the
better responses" to that challenge. For all I know the story itself may be less of the "cliche"/"wish-fulfillment" sort than the
other responses I've seen, but it can't possibly be good enough to overcome that writing style - and I've seen other responses (including, I think,
the very first one) which were better than this one looks to be.