Actually, I'm wondering if Kinsfire isn't actually trying to write a deconstruction of the Harry Sue subgenre. It's impossible to say yet; we'll need to see more chapters to be sure -- but at the moment, setting up a Harry Sue, only to have Evil!Dumbledore and Evil!Minion!Snape be equal to the task of countering him, is rather unusual. If they can keep it up, I'll call this a deconstruction for sure; if Harry (or the girls) starts sweeping the opposition away with ease, though...
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.