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03-07-2011, 04:40 AM

Jorlem Wrote:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6403932/8/
Chain Reaction: a collision of interests, chapter 8. (Fate|Stay Night/Nanoha)

A short note to (briefly) continue some of the discussion when I first recomended this: It's a bit of a slow starter, not really picking up until the cast leaves for Mid-Childa. The author is very good at capturing the thought processes of the main canon characters, but the OC's and background characters brought to the foreground seem a little flat. Despite these weaknesses, it's shaping up to be a worthy read.

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