RE: Thinking about rewrites...
04-03-2018, 07:39 PM (This post was last modified: 04-03-2018, 07:40 PM by robkelk.)
04-03-2018, 07:39 PM (This post was last modified: 04-03-2018, 07:40 PM by robkelk.)
Recaps are usually good. Long, drawn-out recaps aren't.
I recall there's a spot or two in the story where Doug thinks that JKR's wizards and witches aren't very powerful. One of his comments to that effect might be a good spot to insert a quick (one- or two-sentence) description of how Doug's magegift works as a point of comparison, and then mention that he's aware of even more powerful mages back home.
I recall there's a spot or two in the story where Doug thinks that JKR's wizards and witches aren't very powerful. One of his comments to that effect might be a good spot to insert a quick (one- or two-sentence) description of how Doug's magegift works as a point of comparison, and then mention that he's aware of even more powerful mages back home.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Boycotting all products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to threaten to annex my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada