RE: And out of nowhere...
05-19-2018, 01:10 PM (This post was last modified: 05-19-2018, 01:10 PM by Bob Schroeck.)
05-19-2018, 01:10 PM (This post was last modified: 05-19-2018, 01:10 PM by Bob Schroeck.)
It's a bit more than a chapter too early for Rei, and it wouldn't make sense in this context anyway.
And just as an update, I'm almost done with the chapter. I just have to finish the very last, brief, scene, and I can give the new material to the prereaders, who will then tell me whether or not Usagi's reaction is too much.
And just as an update, I'm almost done with the chapter. I just have to finish the very last, brief, scene, and I can give the new material to the prereaders, who will then tell me whether or not Usagi's reaction is too much.
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....