RE: Chapter Two is up
06-01-2018, 07:23 PM (This post was last modified: 06-01-2018, 08:33 PM by robkelk.)
06-01-2018, 07:23 PM (This post was last modified: 06-01-2018, 08:33 PM by robkelk.)
Aargh. How many times did how many people look at this line and not spot this one?
Still reading...
EDIT:
RE-EDIT:
One last oopsie: The concordance page still says "Latest Update: 10 November 2017"
Quote:Consequently, I focused on introducing her to forward techniques, starting with a front breakfall I'd learned from a US Marine when I was first joined the Warriors.Has an extra "was".
Still reading...
EDIT:
Quote:Many thanks to my prereaders on this chapter: Christopher Angel, Kathleen Avins, Nathan Baxter, Andrew Carr, Kevin Cody, Shaye Horwitz, Helen Imre, Eric James, Josh Megerman, Berg Oswell, Peggy Schroeck and Amanda Stair-Duran.*pout*
RE-EDIT:
One last oopsie: The concordance page still says "Latest Update: 10 November 2017"
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada

