So... it's been over a week and the one thing I thought I'd see at least a little discussion about hasn't appeared at all in this thread. Was "Reimei Midori"'s true identity that obvious? (I mean, other than to the few who already know from being prereaders, or were clued in a long time ago because of a passage written for a Fenspace Alternate.) Or did my concerns about the ending of the chapter end up focusing everyone's attention there and make people essentially forget the first scene of the chapter?
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....