[RFC] Being You is Deculture

[ckosacranoid]

I just got done reading this story and skipped a lot of the talked about other posts to get to the action. I do not know much background about your OC in this story. But its not bad and kinda seems a little bit over the top mary sue a bit for power. But since he ended up in the tenchi setup that does not say much even though he did end up becoming the center of the madness though. While it is not a bad story and fun to read, it does pretty much end up in the Marty Stu stuff though. BUt that is my take on the story.