Really nice, BA. There were a few gotchas here and there, but I was too busy reading the story to take notes about them - I know there were a couple in the first few paragraphs, and some missing italics talking with Katherine on the flight back. Um, also a "conscious" that should be "consciousness" or just "mind" or "thoughts." I also know I'm forgetting at least two more... I'll read it again later, and see if I can spot them then. It's always a pain trying to proof your own work; your brain knows what you meant and tends to see it even when it's not exactly what's on the page.
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