RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Return of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
08-28-2018, 07:04 AM (This post was last modified: 08-28-2018, 07:59 PM by robkelk.)
08-28-2018, 07:04 AM (This post was last modified: 08-28-2018, 07:59 PM by robkelk.)
(08-27-2018, 11:36 PM)Labster Wrote: I added a few related scenes to the Halloween party. Rob, you definitely need to read and perhaps revise, as I'm using your characters -- one in particular -- quite a lot and adding characterization. I don't feel bad about this at all, as a random choice about Japanese mythology turned into being the absolute perfect choice once I asked Osaka.
I replaced one period with an exclamation mark in the one-on-one scene. Other than that, I think the scene is good.
I've also added one reaction to the news, in the follow-up scene.
(08-27-2018, 11:36 PM)Labster Wrote: On rereading other people's portions of the party, I may not be clear how transportation is working. Are we taking normal human transit, or portals, or what? Are we staying overnight, a couple days, or just shuffling off home through portals?
Halloween 2016 was a Monday, and I've already established that some of the girls were in Montreal the previous weekend. Portals in and out, and at least Rob's household is only staying one night - the girls have classes Tuesday morning.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada

