[OOC][PLOT] The Return of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals

[robkelk]

Having trouble waking up early is just one of those adolescence things.  I suppose we could always have C-ko drop by to wake her up, lol.

Feel free to delete my last bit of story on Halloween if y'all think it was boring, but I thought that if anyone there knew fluid dynamics, it would be Ami.  Well, and Washuu.  But nerds have a tendency to find each other at parties and talk about the most arcane topics as if they were actually interesting.

Would you mind switching the participants to Tessa and Ami, and moving it to just before Mao and Usagi force them to talk to other people? (I'd expect a submarine designer who's a genius to also know fluid dynamics.)

I just did that, myself. I also added a scene to the "after-party" section (yay for retro-foreshadowing!), which brings the percentage of scenes that involve at least one of my characters to 87.5%. Am I exerting too much influence on the story?

(Oh, yes - Brent, I saw your new email. May as well reply here: I think you'll like Ai Yori Aoshi. It's almost "slice of life", except that it has quite a few "broken bird" characters... and they help each other mend their wings.)