(09-02-2018, 10:51 PM)Bad Moon Wrote: I can see what you mean by Katty Steiner's convo running away from you. Good shit, but it does tend to dominate the chapter.
I was a little worried that it'd end up being Tedious Exposition, so I tried to keep Katrina herself reacting all through the speeeeeeech. Glad to hear it worked to keep interest up.