Enhh. It's okay in parts, but there are chunks that swerve almost violently into the SI wish fulfillment area (and not in a good way). Keitaro himself almost literally has no personal faults and is just sort of generically awesome - and in a addition, he never really personally contributes to the problems.
It was mostly readable, but I'm probably not going to continue following it.
It was mostly readable, but I'm probably not going to continue following it.