Fanfiction update thread 20: Lets do the timewarp again

[classicdrogn]

There's action, sure, but the thrust for the first dozen chapters (at which point I gave up again) is "who dunnit to me?" or more accurately who's messing with his loopadoops - and the whole thing is so annoyingly ambiguously laid out that I don't even care, nor what the agreement was he's supposedly betrayed. That's the critical point, I suppose - failiure to inspire concern for the characters or at least curiosity over the plot. Of course, I already said that mysteries inspire the urge to do violence rather than curiosity.

- CD
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows