RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Third Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
03-03-2019, 09:00 PM (This post was last modified: 03-03-2019, 09:21 PM by Labster.)
03-03-2019, 09:00 PM (This post was last modified: 03-03-2019, 09:21 PM by Labster.)
That sounds like enough for me to write a story, the kind I write. Once you start writing, you can always ask people in the room if they want to contribute to the story, so to speak, and see if it goes anywhere. The same of their environment. Slice of life doesn't need to have an overall plot, because often times real life doesn't.
But if you're less interested in slice of life, then there really needs to be some challenge to overcome. There are the easy things to add, like a medical issue (in your case technical, but still), or a detective story, or a romance. Maybe Alita is the wrong person to add. Maybe you need Desty Nova instead. Don't you think he'd be really interested in capturing a sexaroid and taking it apart piece by piece to see how it worked?
Do they all want to be in a band, or is one or two them just falling into it? Does she really want something else in life?
But if you're less interested in slice of life, then there really needs to be some challenge to overcome. There are the easy things to add, like a medical issue (in your case technical, but still), or a detective story, or a romance. Maybe Alita is the wrong person to add. Maybe you need Desty Nova instead. Don't you think he'd be really interested in capturing a sexaroid and taking it apart piece by piece to see how it worked?
Do they all want to be in a band, or is one or two them just falling into it? Does she really want something else in life?
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