That's nice and natural with a good flow. Belldandy has Presence and solves things properly by using that presense.
A little moderation is helpful. We all have the best intentions but reality often has a different interpretation of our actions
Quote:(Honestly, this was something that kinda hacked me off about Fenspace, that Mal would take stuff my character does and try to portray it in a negative light because "I'm human" and therefore am duty-bound to make mistakes.)
A little moderation is helpful. We all have the best intentions but reality often has a different interpretation of our actions
I love the smell of rotaries in the morning. You know one time, I got to work early, before the rush hour. I walked through the empty carpark, I didn't see one bloody Prius or Golf. And that smell, you know that gasoline smell, the whole carpark, smelled like.... ....speed.
One day they're going to ban them.