If I might make a suggestion...
We already have plenty of major activity at the Halloween party - Usagi re-connecting with her family, folks discovering Nanoha and co, Mikoto and Kuroko advancing their relationship, Rei Hino and Ben having a heart-to-heart talk, Akari getting her curse broken, and Tomo being elevated to the Cytherian nobility, just off the top of my head. At this point, I believe the only things missing from that story are the sparring scene that's my responsibility to write and a few "overheard in conversation" scenes to establish characters are present.
If we're going to run Ben through the wringer - I repeat, if - let's do this during some other get-together. And BA gets to write the scene.
And I'm emphasizing that "if" because I don't see any way that such a scene would add to the story. I'd be just as happy for somebody to idly think of maybe saying something along the lines of a phrase that might drive Ben into his panic state, and Belldandy immediately showing up to explain why that's A Very Bad Idea. Belldandy isn't the type who'd willingly let somebody go through that much pain, especially if there's no reason for it. (Besides, the Norns and Lord Phantomhive need a functional building manager in San Antonio.)
We already have plenty of major activity at the Halloween party - Usagi re-connecting with her family, folks discovering Nanoha and co, Mikoto and Kuroko advancing their relationship, Rei Hino and Ben having a heart-to-heart talk, Akari getting her curse broken, and Tomo being elevated to the Cytherian nobility, just off the top of my head. At this point, I believe the only things missing from that story are the sparring scene that's my responsibility to write and a few "overheard in conversation" scenes to establish characters are present.
If we're going to run Ben through the wringer - I repeat, if - let's do this during some other get-together. And BA gets to write the scene.
And I'm emphasizing that "if" because I don't see any way that such a scene would add to the story. I'd be just as happy for somebody to idly think of maybe saying something along the lines of a phrase that might drive Ben into his panic state, and Belldandy immediately showing up to explain why that's A Very Bad Idea. Belldandy isn't the type who'd willingly let somebody go through that much pain, especially if there's no reason for it. (Besides, the Norns and Lord Phantomhive need a functional building manager in San Antonio.)
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada

