[IC][WIP][Arc 1] How I Managed to Quit Worrying and Love The Grief Seed

[Black Aeronaut]

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Good going.  Your stinger gave me an unrelated idea for another stinger, when I finally write my action chapter.  Lots of stuff happened today, so I'll do an editing pass later.

Ack.  On an emotional level I truly hate those kinds of hooks -- so much good and just a reminder of evil.  As a writer, yes, perfect use of the perfect device for the moment.  But I so want to smash the little bastards.

Inspiration and a Desire To Annihilate?  Mission Accomplished.  

So far only noticed:

conamination

Oh, and I caught a few typos you'll want to fix:

As the Lunar icon apeared on her head, so too did the Silver Moon Crystal.

"Appeared" is misspelled, and as written suggests that the Ginzuishou appeared on her head, too.

Fate and I... we we’re lucky to meet.

were

Fate put her arms around Alicia and burring her head into the pillow next to her sister’s.

"Burying", and the sentence is a fragment.

Thanks.  I'll fix all these when everyone else has weighed in.

I'm also curious if Hild's song a standard minor key with Aeolian mode, or something weirder like Dorian mode to give it a more otherworldly quality.  (no not actually expecting an answer here lol)

I have no idea, but this was the clip in particular that I watched to get an idea of how she sounded... (EDIT: No worries, this is the original Japanese audio, not the English dub. As a bonus, it is however, subbed in English.)