RE: [IC][WIP][Arc 1] How I Managed to Quit Worrying and Love The Grief Seed
04-19-2019, 09:06 AM
04-19-2019, 09:06 AM
(04-18-2019, 11:21 PM)Labster Wrote: As Hild spoke, Washu wheeled out one of her hospital beds. In it was Alcia,
You spelled Alicia and Washu-chan wrong
It isn't in dialogue - I think we're safe leaving off the "-chan".
(04-18-2019, 11:21 PM)Labster Wrote: road to hell
should be spelled: Hel
But Rob and Hyoga haven't been to Hvergelmir yet...
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown