(07-15-2019, 03:23 PM)Labster Wrote: It appears I need to give a few hints. I assure you, there is enough information there for most readers to figure it out.
I'm kind of a fan of the mystery genre. I used at least two of the common techniques used in mystery stories to obscure information.
Quote:After explaining a few of the sights along the waterline, Akari couldn't stand the suspense any more. "Are you a movie star, miss?"
She giggled a little. "I guess I can say I've been in a few movies," she said enigmatically.
That was one of the hints that I noticed. Yay!
I've PM'ed Brent, and he's given me an okay to share more hints. Here's two:
Quote:President Aria [...] smelled her hand, thought about it a minute, then smelled her hand again. Now that doesn't make any sense, he thought.
Quote:"I once knew a man who believed with all his might that love is the only law, love under will. And that our true will would guide us to do the right thing, if we only follow it. But it doesn't always work," she shook her head to emphasize.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown