(08-01-2019, 06:43 PM)Black Aeronaut Wrote: The timeframe for Ben and Jareth's meeting was just after the Trick-or-Treaters had returned with their spoils. Nanoha and Fate had just arrived on Ben's heels because the Takamachis followed them in their own car. Nanoha and Fate both being under 11 years old would count, I think.
I think I put it in the right place in the story, then. (And we'll need to add a "Hello Nanoha and Fate" scene or mention to the story, too.)
Asking yet again for prereading of what exists- this is one reason why.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown