[OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals

[robkelk]

I just put a temporary breakpoint into the middle of Act III, for ease of editing. (Now we don't have to edit the entirety of the biggest section to make a few small changes.) Like the safety cables on light aircraft say, Remove Before Flight.

I also put a bit of still-draft story immediately after that breakpoint. BA, I'd appreciate it if you double-checked Sosuke, Tessa, and Ben's lines.

EDIT: Oh, yes: D-18 to D-Day.

RE-EDIT: Just noticed this line in the draft:

Describe a party canopy/gazebo and its decorations here

Gazebo... and Tomo's dressed as Utena, so she has a sword... so she can do the "Dread Gazebo" joke!

Rob, later: "Tomo referenced the Eric and the Dread Gazebo story? And I missed it? Now I'm depressed."