Quote:(The "learning magic" scene can be jettisoned if necessary... but it is a requested scene. Can't move it to one of those earlier random scenes because it involves trick-or-treaters.)Dropping that request entirely. It makes more sense later on for plot reasons. It still would make some sense here, but not important enough to be a blocker.
We may just want to rearrange existing scenes into those blocks where a scene is needed to break flow. I've written everything I've thought I could throw in at this point.
Except... I have another idea for Saber. It may not work because I think I'm basing the idea more on the romantic legends of Arthur than on the more Welsh stories she resembles. But eh, I suppose it's worth a try. I'd try writing more of them in, but sorry Saber is the one and only character I identified with in Fate and probably only then because I'm conflating her with other versions of her character.
We should also considering tell-not-show scenes at this point because we're really down to the wire.
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