[OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals

[Labster]

I am actually done here.

The only thing things I can see that need done are:

• "Chibiusa" vs. "Chibi-Usa" and "Sosuke" v. "Sousuke" (has the fandom standardized on either?)
  
• Chapter 4 is a bit thin compared to Chapter 3, not sure if any remaining content can move down
  
• The Osaka/Kazari scene now needs to be moved below the Osaka/Claw scene to make sense -- not sure if it can be inserted into Chapter 4, or just later into Chapter 3.
  
• The first time a character appears, or does something significant, their whole name should be mentioned.  I mean, we have three Reis in this story.  I can't find "Hakubi", "Frye", "Li", "Glory", "Melissa" (reverse case?), "Washburne" and "Hoban" (only nickname), "Ibuki" (I seriously thought she was the cat for a while), "Ferrari", or "Mizuno".
  
• Of course, some of the line breaks should be turned into text transitions.
  
• We still need a better title...
  

Spoiler

OK, I don't think I can really come up with a better title than "Halloween in Another World", being the less weeaboo form of "Isekai Halloween".  It has a couple meanings, both for Akari's story and all of the displacees in general.  The title Ben liked, "Night of the Living Retcon", is funny but doesn't relate to the plot.  (I did make one continuity error, but I decided to keep it in because it could easily just be magic.)

Getting a title for this thing is hard, because it's not really about one person or event.  "Halloween" or "San Antonio" should probably be included.  Thematically it turned out to be about encounters between different characters from different universes, as expected.  But there was also a major theme of strength and nobility, which I fear was almost entirely my fault.