And done. The arc welding was well done, and the new material all very good. There were a couple spelling/grammar errors, but I didn't log them; but they were very few. I did have one continuity concern that only manifested itself when I saw everything together... I think it was when Ben stops Rei, he's by himself, but he'd had his Naonha/Fate moment not long before -- why aren't they shadowing him? Why are they leaving him alone?
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....