Aside from a couple of things I mentioned in PM, it looks good to me. (And boy, do I ever know that productivity envy!) Much improved, and any time I can help increase the ratio of good-to-bad-fic is a happy day.
(And one of these days I really do mean to read your fic too, Rajvik, and give whatever commentary I can. There's just so many other shiny sparklies that keep catching my eye...)
(And one of these days I really do mean to read your fic too, Rajvik, and give whatever commentary I can. There's just so many other shiny sparklies that keep catching my eye...)
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‎noli esse culus
‎noli esse culus