s3yang Wrote:Actually, now that I've had some time to reflect on this....WengFook Wrote:Enh. I generally find that when things are that badly handled the impact suffers right along with everything else. And this was more GrimDerp than GrimDark.werehawk Wrote:Very grim & dark flavored fanfic. Hinata's choice was nasty however what happens to Tsunade...Oh man what did I just read? Ugh. I really don't know how to adequately express how badly handled some of the plot points were introduced and then resolved in the story.
Now I need to go read something obscenely happy and fun for a week to wash out the grimdark aftertaste that I got from this fic. -_-
...The ending was rushed. No, think about it. We got Hinata back home, with plans to go back and take her kid back... We got Tsunade in town, unhappy with the situation, but there and doing her job nonetheless... We got a pending tournament to see who's gonna be the next Hokage... We got Uchiha Madara, plotting in the shadows, as well as the Akatsuki... Naruto's due for his training trip...
And then suddenly the whole thing gets wrapped up in an unsightly bow.
Occams Razor Logic sez this sucker was orignially intended for a much longer run, but instead the author did an end-run on it. No more, no less.