Fanfic Recommendations Go Hawaiian

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I don't know if it was posted previously or not, but The Weaver Option, where Worm meets WH40K,
and 40K needs some serious help dealing with the likes of Taylor Hebert

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12115800/1/...ver-Option

I'm going to be honest. I read the first chapter, and it's a good and interesting premise, but the guy needs a much better beta than the one he's got now. As is, the story's very difficult for me to read due to the often awkward sentence structure, and the occasional obviously wrong word choice that makes a sentence unintelligible.

Shenanigans do indeed ensue, and it's a good story. But it doesn't hold back on the horrifying implications of Portal's setting either.

Which is a big part of the draw, in my opinion.