I've been trying to rewrite the end and the choice is between:
Zorian allowing Minerva to subject him and his sister to a spell he'd consider a dangerous menace.
Minerva allowing a 16 year old boy to apparate.
Zorian casting a spell (gate) Minerva doesn't recognise and which doesn't have a direct equivalent in Harry Potter. I've written this, but do you have any suggestions as to how Minerva should react to the sight?
Zorian allowing Minerva to subject him and his sister to a spell he'd consider a dangerous menace.
Minerva allowing a 16 year old boy to apparate.
Zorian casting a spell (gate) Minerva doesn't recognise and which doesn't have a direct equivalent in Harry Potter. I've written this, but do you have any suggestions as to how Minerva should react to the sight?