Quote:ClassicDrogn wrote:Oh, dear god, that was awful, in the best possible way. Seconding the recommendation.
http://m.fanfiction.net/s/10122465/1/H ... the-Garden
Harry Potter does indeed have a power the Dark Lord knows not, and it's a bit more weaponizable than Love. Beware of an abrupt scene shift here and there where horizontal rule tags didn't survive FFn's filters, though most are intact - it's a quick sketch of a few short scenes in about a thousand words, but we've all seen one circuit after another past the stations of canon so that's enough to give the shape of things without belaboring the point.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.