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10-09-2014, 06:15 PM

On Reinforced-Magic: I read the first two chapters, found the dialog and characters to be flat and wooden, and it could have used a lot more "show, don't tell". It might be an interesting idea, but it doesn't seem to be my cup of tea.
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