RE: Ranma / Ah My Goddess! Crossover: Divine Patronage
01-14-2021, 05:28 AM (This post was last modified: 01-14-2021, 05:29 AM by Labster.)
01-14-2021, 05:28 AM (This post was last modified: 01-14-2021, 05:29 AM by Labster.)
Quote:- Have Mara reveal her undying love for Urd - not sure how she’d reactSounds like we're trying for a crack fic
Quote:- Watch Nabiki goad Ranma into doing coke (but fail, this is a wholesome fanfiction)Hey not so literally!
Quote:- Prove once and for all that Ukyo is Best Girl anywayWait, this still needs to be proven? Ucchan is great!
> Ty’rs
typo
> of course it was a convertible, Ranma thought.
I keep seeing the Akio Car in my mind here, especially given the rest of the crazy shit
> In the Greek sense, of course.”
"Wanna French?"
> Huitzchipotli
Huitzilopochtli. OMG how many people will read that and immediately know it's misspelled; I went way too deep into Aztec stuff for my Aria crossover because I'm also insane.
> few quintillion Yggbucks
Inflation seems to be a problem in the Nine Worlds
> It was once said by great demigod philosopher Eribodi Wang-Chung To’ni’te
+the. And I wish I had come up with this joke.
> ameuter
amateur
> she brushed her neutron-white hair
I have no idea what this means but I still like it?
> forbidden by shogun in 1745 after Incident Sizeable Narwhal
I assume that was almost as bad as the Spaghetti Incident or even a Helvetica Scenario?
I guess I'll read more chapters tomorrow.
robkelk Wrote:If somebody tells you that you're writing characters out-of-character, then you should listen.This is soooo not how I'm writing Urd in my story but that's okay cause its funny. Writing in-character is overrated anyway, right? I'd say Urd's characterization is consistent enough it works regardless.
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