AMG!Urd loves her sister almost to the point that Tomoyo Daidouji loves Sakura Kinomoto. Belldandy is the reason she is not a demon; their relationship is why she continues to want to be a goddess and live up to her younger sister's example. To see Urd complaining about her sister's happiness seems a little wrong. Her self-pity will only take her so far, even when drunk.
Also she's in Japan, so the illegal drugs thing is kinda something that would be very off-limits for someone trying to be a goddess. She'd get her drivers goddess license suspended. I know she's Norse and the Scandinavian attitude is quite different, but she is still trying to be a paragon of happy goodness, even if Bell does it better.
I mean, the main thing I saw is that you crank up her personality to eleven, when Urd has good reasons to be more of a seven.
On Ranma's girls, I mean, you have to understand they all have hormones and Ranma is really good looking in both forms. I guess I haven't read enough fic to ruin them all for me and I've read the manga but not seen most of the anime. On Ami/Ranma, they're both good looking, and he studies martial arts as hard as she studies school. I still can't help but feel like Rei/Ranma is the more natural match, but in the real world love matches aren't always what you'd expect.
Honestly I just wish you could tell me how you write at this speed because it takes me forever to do anything. Honestly 500 words in a day would be a triumph for me. Which is another way of saying there isn't much Urd to see yet... just one scene of note in the There's Nothing Better subforum -- search for "chugging" to get to the scene where she's flirting with my SI. There are other references to Urd in that long story, but half of them are to Sakura's The Mirror card, who is currently impersonating chibi-Urd for Halloween.
Also she's in Japan, so the illegal drugs thing is kinda something that would be very off-limits for someone trying to be a goddess. She'd get her drivers goddess license suspended. I know she's Norse and the Scandinavian attitude is quite different, but she is still trying to be a paragon of happy goodness, even if Bell does it better.
I mean, the main thing I saw is that you crank up her personality to eleven, when Urd has good reasons to be more of a seven.
On Ranma's girls, I mean, you have to understand they all have hormones and Ranma is really good looking in both forms. I guess I haven't read enough fic to ruin them all for me and I've read the manga but not seen most of the anime. On Ami/Ranma, they're both good looking, and he studies martial arts as hard as she studies school. I still can't help but feel like Rei/Ranma is the more natural match, but in the real world love matches aren't always what you'd expect.
Honestly I just wish you could tell me how you write at this speed because it takes me forever to do anything. Honestly 500 words in a day would be a triumph for me. Which is another way of saying there isn't much Urd to see yet... just one scene of note in the There's Nothing Better subforum -- search for "chugging" to get to the scene where she's flirting with my SI. There are other references to Urd in that long story, but half of them are to Sakura's The Mirror card, who is currently impersonating chibi-Urd for Halloween.
"Kitto daijoubu da yo." - Sakura Kinomoto