Can I say that a quest laid down from authority to 'win a maiden's heart' sounds all sorts of skeevy to me? And that's at its most positive?
Because it really, really sounds skeevy to me for starters.
And while I'm not liking Urd much in this fic, I'm finding Peorth rapidly dropping into 'punch until she leaves' levels of appreciation. Actually, the entire AMG cast has, so far, been a little to mostly off their characterization and more bend and mangled to fit a Ranma storyline regardless of the consequences.
Because it really, really sounds skeevy to me for starters.
And while I'm not liking Urd much in this fic, I'm finding Peorth rapidly dropping into 'punch until she leaves' levels of appreciation. Actually, the entire AMG cast has, so far, been a little to mostly off their characterization and more bend and mangled to fit a Ranma storyline regardless of the consequences.