Conflict between the bad guys is always fun. I'm just torn between showing Ben have Marty Stu-levels of success before the reveal that Drosselmeyer is giving them to him, or having the reader looking over D's shoulder as he nudges things Ben's way. I'm not sure which would work better.
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....